Blink of an Eye

Tick tock,
Goes the clock,
Now its stopped,
Now its stopped,
Time will start,
Time will end,
With a tock,
it starts again.

It creeps me out for some reason.... I LOVE IT

XD you have to remember that I was very depressed (which is why I chose to give opal a chance) but this poem wasnt meant to be depressing. I have a meaning for it but I wont give it away.

I miss my past,
I miss feeling like I wasn't broken into so many pieces
But it would never last,
these are broken leases.

But I cry for today,
For the things I do wrong,
Perhaps I'm in the way,
Perhaps I knew all along.

I wait for the future,
And I continue to dream,
Goodbye my abusers,
You were never as you seemed.

Wow, this is amazing! *Claps* :)

I like this poem! :D



That's what poems are for, expressing emotion, and every poem has a meaning from the person who wrote it, either from a past experience, or a dream.. :3

O_O
That's really good.
It reminds me of a kind of depression, actually. Like, for most who have it, during winter the grayness and cold makes them depressed, but then it gets better. :3

Yeah, it's really good.

Exactly Moth :3 and thank you Magpie, I like that meaning :3 very deep.

Thanks guys, I blame Sea for this one, we got into some deep stuff from last night. I dont really like it much, just the first part. I might edit it later :P

No no dont holo this is awesome. You rock at crap like this girl. Glad I could help with my deepness and all

Welll okayyyy and thank you :D

:)

SunStar wrote:

No no dont holo this is awesome. You rock at crap like this girl. Glad I could help with my deepness and all

NUU! HOLLOW IS AWESOME AT EVERYTHING! x3

NO IM NOT D: but thats really sweet XD

Ill go left you'll go right,
"Maybe again well meet on the path of life",
But you know the truth and so do I,
That's just another of your lies.

I step away from you and go on alone,
But somehow I want to beg you not to go.
The tears soak my already stained face,
But these are the moments I wish not to waste.

Ill go on walking and through the night,
It seems so long ago you left my side,
I knew this was coming for long the longest time,
But I never knew this was the end that I would find.

Ill never think of the times we laughed,
And Ill choose not to look back,
And regret may come and sting again,
But its true, my heart will someday mend.

Ill go left youll go right,
But thats ok, I'll be alright,
The fog will lift and and Ill see the day,
And Ill be happy to have gone my own way.

And here I was thinking I was the poet of the two of us. This is amazing. And I am not just saying that because you are my best friend. I MEAN it. This is amazing it really is Holo. *hugs*

You are a poet, both of us are I guess. I didnt think it was good

Couldn't have said it better Sun! This is awesome!

Thanks mothy thats really sweet

It's great, but I prefer some of your other poems more. :3

Thanks MagPie XD I like my other ones better, this one didnt have as much thought, it was more to just get it out of my head.

You can sit there and scream all you want,
But I will never be more thankful for what youve done,
The times Ive seen you scream or cry,
The times I know youve told me lies,
I can simply forgive it all,
And be ok you never pick me up when I fall,
Because there a secret I will always hold,
Its enough so I will not fold,
Under the pressure of you and her,
And now Ill tell you what Ive learned.

You made my life hard thats the truth,
But theres this kindness I will use,
Sometimes people may make mistakes,
But that is the easiest thing that I can take,
Because you may have corrupted my past,
But it made me a better person finally, at last,
Ill learn from all the anger you have caused,
And from all the time you have lost,
Inside I know that this may be,
Soon ill be amazing you will see.

You may hate me, this I know,
But that is something I learned long ago,
I will never be able to thank you more,
Because instead of letting myself be torn,
I learned to forgive and to love,
And to be thankful for the sky above,
Instead of falling into a dark descent,
I found I have strength left to lend,
Yes, thank you for those tears of old,
Thank you for me this person I know.

Praises are due to you girl. I am serious it is wonderful. But I have told you that now STOP MESSAGING ME ON FB TO COMMENT ON YOU POEM. :D Thank you that is all

I WANTED YOUR OPINION *kicks*